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This photo was taken at Painted Hills which is a unit of John Day Fossil Beds National Monument, located in Wheeler County, Oregon. [link]

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:icontalescaper:
I think I like and admire your portraits a lot more then your landscapes and perhaps this is a good illustration why. Your portraits always have something to tell and can be extremely alive. This photo looks extremely empty. And sure, it's a wonderful landscape and it looks like it would make for great hiking and I'd love to visit. But photography, as you know from your awesome journalistic photography, is more then that. I like every photograph to tell a story or to be dynamic in some way. It needs to go beyond looking at something. So I'm actually surprised that you did not find a more interesting angle in this landscape, something creative to draw us into the frame. There doesn't seem to be much composition except for the lines of the horizon and the (somewhat awkwardly framed) hill in the front. So what caught your eye here? What is it that you want to show us? Your portraits can always show us so much, so perhaps you can delve into that same energy with a landscape. And I know it's much harder to give vision or meaning to something that you can't literally communicate to. But I think that's what your challenge is here. Good luck with it. I know you can do it :D
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:iconbeautifulwolf:
Stunning photo. I live in Oregon, but have been unable to visit this beautiful place yet. It's on my list of to-dos though. Thanks for sharing your trip!

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:iconloverz116:
wow, wicked shot. looks like it was drawn or painted!

:D
:icondigitalgrace:
I've been talking to people here about it and none of them have been out there... I think most of the people that go are from out of the state or country LOL

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:icondigitalgrace:
Thank you Corina :heart:



:peace:

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:iconbeautifulwolf:
I KNOW!! It's because there's "nothing past Bend" ;0P I'm in Western Oregon, and use all my vacation days on the coast. I need to travel east though... someday :)

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:icondigitalgrace:
Yea... I'm in McMinnville right now and it was quite a long drive out there... but the beautiful things I saw along the way and the Painted Hills were well worth it :)



:peace:

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:iconloverz116:
you welcomeee Danny :tighthug:

:peace:
:iconbeautifulwolf:
My best friend lives in Mac. I love Airport park, and that one by the water park, with the HUGE play equipment set up (I have a 4 year old ;) I love this area. So green, and beautiful *G*

What route did you take to the painted hills? Did you go 22 through Salem? I go to Redmond about once a year, but have never been east of there, except Utah, and along I-84 to Idaho.

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Jun 23, 2009, 6:18:09 PM

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